Question

【题目】昨天我校邀请知名校友李先生为高三学生作报告,请你根据以下要点为我校英文期刊Shoots写一篇100字左右的报道：

1. 校友回忆在我校学习的经历；

2. 校友的成功及对母校的感激；

3. 自己听报告后的感想。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加情节,以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已为你写好。

Yesterday we invited Mr. Li, a famous scholar and schoolmate of our school, to give a speech to us Senior 3 students. _________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Yesterday we invited Mr. Li, a famous scholar and schoolmate of our school to give a speech to us Senior 3 students. All of us felt deeply touched by his lecture and proud of our distinguished schoolmate.

Mr. Li once studied in this same school many years ago and later he went to a famous university in the North. After graduation, he devoted his life to teaching in the rural areas of our country for more than 30 years. His devotion and selflessness are highly thought of by all his students as well as by the society. Meanwhile, he donated many books to our school and showed deep affection to his former teachers and his high school.

As a senior high school student, I’m determined to learn from Mr. Li and become a worthwhile schoolmate of our school.

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇一篇回忆的报道文章。文章主要讲述了我回忆母校的经历并且表达了我对母校的敬意的文章。全文章节明显，结构紧凑。首段点名这篇文章的主要内容，讲明为什么要写这篇文章的原因。第二段是对母校生活的回忆。第三段是表达自己对母校的敬意。环环相扣，并且紧紧抓住题目所给的要点，避免了偏题，用词较为新颖，用了大量的从句和连词将文章紧凑的连接起来，值得给以好评。