Question

【题目】英语课上老师让同学们写一篇英语文章，谈谈对当前中学生中存在的某些饮食现状的看法。
提示如下：
1).越来越多的中学生不喜欢吃蔬菜水果，甚至不吃早餐，而是喜欢吃垃圾食品；
2).对健康的饮食习惯同学们有不同看法；
3).你的看法和观点。
注意：1).词数100左右；
2).可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】Healthy eating habits are very important for our health. We should build healthy eating habits. We should eat fresh vegetables and fruits everyday.They supply rich and the necessary vitamins for us. We also should eat less meat everday.And we had better drink a glass of milk in the morning or at night. Besides, we should focus on abalanced diet, which assures us the necessary nutritions. Junk food is a fatal killer for our health so that we should stay far from them. It is said that most of students do not eat anything at all in the morning. It is very bad for our health. Breakfast is the most important meal for people.

【解析】本文是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，属于提纲类作文，这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。根据材料内容可知本文要使用第一人称，因为是谈看法提供建议，所以时态不复杂，用一般现在时态，写作的话题为，谈谈对当前中学生中存在的某些饮食现状的看法。

写作步骤：
一、阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。
1. 越来越多的中学生不喜欢吃蔬菜水果，甚至不吃早餐，而是喜欢吃垃圾食品；
2.对健康的饮食习惯同学们有不同看法；
3.你的看法和观点。
二、根据要点，写出关键词、短语或句子。 build healthy eating habits.， supply sth for sb,had better do..., Besides, focus on ..., stay far from..., It is said that ...,not...at all ,
三、组词成句连句成篇。注意使用多种句型。
Healthy eating habits are very important for our health. They supply rich and the necessary vitamins for us.And we had better drink a glass of milk in the morning or at night. Besides, we should focus on abalanced diet, which assures us the necessary nutritions. Junk food is a fatal killer for our health so that we should stay far from them. It is said that most of students do not eat anything at all in the morning.