Question

12．假如你是李华．最近你所居住的涉外小区里车辆乱停乱放现象很严重．请你根据所给提示，给小区负责人史密斯先生写一封信反应这个问题．要点包括：
1．分析原因2．你的建议
注意：1．词数100左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2．可根据内容适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Mr Smith，
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Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型
句型一：
 I think one reason is that there is not enough parking places．使用that引导表语从句，表示"我认为这里没有足够的地方停车是原因之一"．
句型二：
You know，there has been a rapid increase in the number of private cars here．本文多次使用 there be句型，the number of 表示"…的数量"．

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
    Parking in our community is becoming a more and more serious problem and is bringing lots of inconvenience to our life．
    I think one reason is that there is not enough parking places．【高分句型一】You know，there has been a rapid increase in the number of private cars here．【高分句型二】Howerer，the number of parking places has remained the same．Besides，there are no strict rules for foreign vehicles．So people who don't live here park their cars anywhere they want．（分析原因）
    I hope the problem can be solved as soon as possible．Here are my suggestions．First，more parking areas should be built．In addition，effective parking rules should be introduced．（建议）
                                                                                                     Yours，
                                                                                 Li Hua

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