Question

假如你是李华，上周在英国参加了你校组织的“中学生文化交流周”活动，并住在Kelly家里。请你给在英国期间认识的新朋友Kelly写封感谢信，内容包括：

交流活动中的收获;

难忘在Kelly家的美好日子;

感谢她送你的英文词典。

注意：1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

提示词汇：文化交流周 Cultural Exchange Week

Dear Kelly,

   I’ve been back home safely from England.                                                

                                                                                    

                                                                                     

                                                                                    

   Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you!

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Kelly,

   I’ve been back home safely from England. Thank you for the warm help during my stay in England.

   Last week, I participated in the Cultural Exchange Week. I enjoyed myself in your country. We visited the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history. Of course, I also made many new friends.

   What’s more, I was lucky enough to stay at your home. And I’ll never forget the days we spent together.

Here I especially thank you for the dictionary you offered me as a gift. It’s a great help for me to learn English well. I will treasure and make full use of it.

   Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇书信。文章给出了提纲式汉语提示。成文时应注意一下几点：（1）内容要点要齐全；a交流活动中的收获;b难忘在Kelly家的美好日子;c感谢她送你的英文词典。（2）人称：以第一人称为主；（3）时态：一般过去时和一般现在时为主；（4）适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅；（5）恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。

【亮点说明】1.使用高级句型：（1）I enjoyed myself in your country. We visited the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history.（2）It’s a great help for me to learn English well.2.使用了过渡词语：What’s more, I was lucky enough to stay at your home. Of course, I also made many new friends. 3.使用了重要短语：I will treasure and make full use of it. I participated in the Cultural Exchange Week. I enjoyed myself in your country.

考点：考查书信类书面表达。