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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

There was a rich man who carried many treasures to look into happiness. But after a long march, he fails to find happiness. Annoyed, he sat by a path of the mountain while a farmer carrying a large bunch of firewood came down from the mountain. The rich man said, “I’m a wealth man. Can you tell me that why I’m unhappy?” The farmer put down the heavy firewood, wiped the sweat pleasant and said, “Happiness is very simple: put down and you’ll be happy!” The rich man inspired suddenly. Anxious and tiring all day, he carried that heavy jewelry, afraid of being robbed or murdered. How could you be happy? So the rich man helped the poor with jewelry and money, doing some good deed. He enjoyed the taste of happiness.

Answer 1

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【解析】1.into 改为for

考查固定搭配。句意：有一个富人带着许多财宝寻找幸福。Look for…寻找，look into…朝里看，调查。富人去寻找幸福的，所以要把into 改为for.

2.fails改为failed

考查谓语动词的时态。本文主要讲述的是过去的事，故要用一般过去时，因此要把fails 改failed.

3.while 改为when

考查关系副词。句意：他坐在一条山路旁，这个时候一个扛着一大堆柴火的农夫从山上下来。当从句的谓语动词是短暂性动词，而且主句的谓语动词也是短暂性动词时，一般用when。 分析本句的主从句的谓语动词可知都是短暂性动词（sit和came），故要用when.