Question

1．假如你校正在开展"读古典名著"的讨论活动．不同的学生对这一活动有着不同的看法，请你根据下表内容写一篇英语短文．    
支持者帮助我们了解古代文化习俗；有借鉴作用    
反对者语言与今天大不相同，很难读懂；读名著过时了，也很乏味    
你的观点…
注意：1．语言连贯，符合逻辑；2．合理添加你的观点；3．词数120左右．
参考词汇：classic n．名著　cultivate v．陶冶．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
Some are in favor of（1）reading classics，maintaining（2）that they can help us know more  about some cultures and customs in old times．一些人支持读古典名著，坚称它们有助于我们更多的了解古代文化习俗．
（1）be in favor of 支持．
（2）maintain 坚称，本句中用现在分词maintaining充当伴随状语；非谓语动词在书面表达中属于亮点句型．
句型二：
some students think it unnecessary for us to read（1）the classics because the language used in classics is quite different from that used today（2），which （3）is difficult to understand．一些学生认为我们没有必要读古典名著，因为在古典名著中运用的语言与今天的语言完全不同，很难理解．
（1）think it unnecessary for sb．to do sth．表示"认为某人没有必要做…"，其中it 为形式宾语，for sb．to do 为真正的宾语．
（2）that为代词，替代上文提到的language，used today 为过去分词短语做that的定语，that used today特指今天的语言．
（3）which引导了非限制性定语从句，指代上文的the language used in classics（古典名著中的语言）．定语从句是书面表达中的常见的高分句型．
句型三：
it is necessary to read the classics in our spare time in that （1）they can not only enrich our knowledge we can't get in our daily life，but also （2）enables us to （3）obtain the food for the spirit about the ancient cultures．我们有必要在业余时间里阅读名著，因为它们不仅能够丰富我们日常生活中不能获得的知识，而且使我们能够获得关于古代文化的精神食粮．
（1）in that 因为，其结构为介词in后接that引导的宾语从句．
（2）not only…but also不但…而且…；往往用来连接并列的结构；
（3）enable sb．to do sth．动词短语，表示"使某人能够做…"

解答 We are having a discussion about reading classics in our school（引出话题）．Some are in favor of reading classics，maintaining that they can help us know more  about some cultures and customs in old times【高分句型一】．Furthermore，we can learn something useful because they have something to do with our life today（支持的观点）．However，some students think it unnecessary for us to read the classics because the language used in classics is quite different from that used today，which is difficult to understand【高分句型二】．They also think the classics are old fashioned and boring（反对的观点）．
   In my view，it is necessary to read the classics in our spare time in that they can not only enrich our knowledge we can't get in our daily life，but also enables us to obtain the food for the spirit about the ancient cultures【高分句型三】（我的观点）．

点评 写作时首先审题要到位：审体裁、人称和时态；审要点．其次要考虑高分词语和句型的选用，从句、非谓语动词、倒装、强调句型等都是可考虑的高级句型；词语和句型的选用要包含作者的感情色彩和增强表达的气势；再次，运用关联词如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流畅．