Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两赴，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It was Grandpa’s birthday party. It was not easy to have his children and grandchildren all back home together. so they just busied themselves in playing their cellphones, totally ignored their grandpa, who let in a deep sigh and left the party.

There is no doubt whether cellphones have a negative impact on our lives. Heavy use of cellphones actually widen the distance between teenagers and their elders, leaving the elders more lonely. Worsely still, addiction to cellphones might also lead to teenagers’ poor performance at school, which adds up to elders’ worries.

As far as I was concerned, it’s necessary to limit the time we spend using cellphones. And I attach great importance to communicate with our family members face to face, which helps build a harmony family atmosphere.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】so改为but

【2】ignored 改为 ignoring

【3】in 改为 out

【4】whether改为 that

【5】widen 改为widens

【6】Worsely 改为 Worse

【7】up 去掉

【8】was改为am

【9】communicate 改为communicating

【10】harmony 改为harmonious

【解析】

试题分析: 当今，很多青少年拥有手机，而越来越多的长辈因为晚辈在家庭聚会上只顾玩手机，却不和他们聊天感到万分失落。

【1】So改为but 。考查连词辨析。so所以，表顺承；but但是，表转折。依据文意这里应该为转折，故So改为but。

【2】ignored 改为 ignoring。考查现在分词。现在分词表示某动作一直持续着或者一直保持某种状态。文意“忽视”这一状态作伴随状语，故ignored 改为 ignoring。

【3】In 改为 out。考查词组搭配。let out 发出。let out a deep and left the party叹了一口气便离开了聚会。故In 改为 out。

【4】Whether改为 that。考查代词用法。There is no doubt that…这毋庸置疑……这里在否定句和疑问句中,doubt后面接that引导的宾语从句，在肯定句中,doubt后面一般接whether或if引导的宾语从句。故Whether改为 that。

【5】Widen 改为widens。考查主谓一致。Heavy use of cellphones为主语从句，作句子的主语，其后接第三人称单数，故Widen 改为widens。

【6】Worsely 改为 worse 。考查词组搭配。worse still,更糟糕的是；更坏。Worse无Worsely形式，副词形式应为badly.故Worsely 改为 worse。

【7】Up 去掉。考查词组搭配。add up加起来; 总计which adds to elders’ worries这增加了长辈的忧虑。Add作增加意思不需要加介词up，故Up 去掉。

【8】was改为am。考查主谓一致。As far as I am concerned，就我而言。这里无需时态变化，是就事发表评论。

【9】Communicate 改为communicating。考查词组搭配。attach great importance to communicating，这里的to不是不定式，是介词。attach great importance to高度重视

【10】Harmony 改为harmonious。考查词性辨析。Harmony，名词，协调;融洽。这里要改为其形容词形式harmonious来修饰family。故Harmony 改为harmonious。