Question

【题目】假如你是Li Hua，你的美国朋友Peter最近因几次考试成绩不佳而感到很苦恼。为此，请你用英语写封信安慰他，主要内容包括：

1. 鼓励他振作起来；

2. 提出合理建议；

3. 提出希望。

注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,

After reading your last letter, I am sorry to learn that

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

After reading your last letter, I am sorry to learn that you are feeling upset because of failing in exams recently.

Personally, as middle school students, we all should take many exams and it is natural to experience failures sometimes, so there is no need to feel too bad. Instead, cheer up and find ways to reduce your worries. Why not go on an outing with your friends or find time to listen to your favorite music? What’s more, it’s better to explore a new learning method which is better and more suitable for you. You can also turn to your teachers for help.

So long as you improve your ways of learning and work harder, I am sure you will succeed in the near future.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子书信：假如你是Li Hua，你的美国朋友Peter最近因几次考试成绩不佳而感到很苦恼。为此，请你用英语写封信安慰他，主要内容包括：1. 鼓励他振作起来；2. 提出合理建议；3. 提出希望。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：after reading your last letter（读完你的上一封信之后）；experience failures （体验失败）；explore a new learning method（探索新的学习方法）；turn to（求助于）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。