Question

【题目】书面表达

目前出国旅游很热门，假设你是某高中学生李华,你的朋友Lily计划假期出国旅游，希望你能给予她一些建议。请你用英语写一篇电子邮件回复她。

要点如下：

1.旅游中出现的一些不文明现象。

2.你的建议。

注意：1.词数在100左右，

2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

3.参考词汇：吐痰 spit；树立形象 uphold an image

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear lily，

I am so glad to receive your letter lelling me you will go on an overseas trip , here are my suggestions.

As we know , with more and more Chinese going on overseas trips, some of them shout loudly , litter or spit in public , which has done great harm to our good reputation. Therefore , to begin with , you have to understand and respect foreign cultures , so as to get along well . And before you start your overseas trip , remember to learn about the culture and custom there . What’s more , wherever you go you need to protect the enviroment . In this way , you1’ll win respect for yourself as well as our country . Finally , you should always keep in mind that it is everyone’s responsibility to unhold image of our motherland.

I do wish you have a good time!

【解析】

试题分析：目前出国旅游很热门，假设你是某高中学生李华,你的朋友Lily计划假期出国旅游，希望你能给予她一些建议。请你用英语写一篇电子邮件回复她。要点如下：1.旅游中出现的一些不文明现象。2.你的建议。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1.词数在100左右。

【亮点说明】I am so glad to receive your letter telling me you will go on an overseas trip在此句中现在分词短语作定语；As we know , with more and more Chinese going on overseas trips, some of them shout loudly , litter or spit in public , which has done great harm to our good reputation. As引导的非限制性定语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句在句中同时出现；Therefore , to begin with , you have to understand and respect foreign cultures , so as to get along well .动词不定式短语做独立成分和动词不定式短语做目的状语巧妙结合；And before you start your overseas trip , remember to learn about the culture and custom there .运用了时间状语从句和祈使句；What’s more , wherever you go you need to protect the enviroment . wherever引导让步状语从句；另外，Therefore , What’s more , In this way , Finally ,的运用为文章增色添彩。