Question

1．注意：词数100左右．
按照下列内容提示，写一篇题目为"人人需要朋友"的短文（题目已给出）．?
你的作文必须包括以下要点：
1．朋友的重要性．开阔视野；分享快乐与痛苦；互相帮助等等．
2．如何交到好朋友．（至少两条建议）

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
What's more，friends are like books，which can broaden your horizons．而且，朋友就像书籍，可以开阔你的视野．
高分句型二：
In my opinion，if you follow these suggestions，you will surely get along well with others and have many friends．在我看来，如果你遵守了以下建议，你肯定能够和别人友好相处并交到朋友．
句型一 which can broaden your horizons 该句是一个由which引导的费限制性定语，which在从句中充当主语，替代先行词books
句型二 if you follow these suggestions，you will surely get along well with others and have many friends 该句是一个由if引导的条件状语从句，在使用时应注意，状语从句主从句应遵循"主将从现"的规律，即主句用将来时，从句用一般现在时表将来
此外，还有以下短语和高级词汇：play an important role in    in one's opinion

解答 Everyone needs friends．For example，friends will always be there to share your happiness as well as sorrow，whatever happens； when you have difficulties，friends will come and help you out．Believe it or not，friends or friendship plays an important role in your daily life．With no friendship，you would feel extremely lonely．What's more，friends are like books，which can broaden your horizons．（朋友的重要性）（高分句型一）How can you make close friends？I think first you must be friendly and honest．Second，you must be concerned about others and willing to help those who are in trouble．In my opinion，if you follow these suggestions，you will surely get along well with others and have many friends．（交友办法）（高分句型二）

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文一般规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．