Question

下面是某中外合资企业刊登在昨天的China Daily上的一则广告：
Office secretary(办公秘书)， with experience in bookkeeping, typewriting, public relations, operating PC (personal computer).  Address,  age,  health condition.
Write to A518, Charlie Office.
假如你是张林，现年20岁，身体健康，学习英语6年，学过广告中所列项目。通信地址是滨海市745信箱（P.O.Box745）。请根据广告中提出的招聘职务、应聘条件和你自己的简要情况，写一封自荐信。字数：120词左右。
Dear Sir,
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Yours;
Zhang Ling

Answer 1

Dear Sir,
I have read your advertisement in yesterday’s China Daily. I feel I am qualified for the job in your company. I’m 20 years old and in good health. After graduation from a middle school, I studied English for six years. I also learned bookkeeping, typewriting and public relations. I’m good at operating PC and have a good command of English. I’m interested in the position of a secretary. I want very much to be accepted by your company. I’ll work hard if I can be a member in your company.
Yours,
Zhang Ling

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。要求根据广告中提出的招聘职务、应聘条件和你自己的简要情况，写一封自荐信，要点都已经给出，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。
点评：书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。