Question

6．下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
      2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

When I was boy，the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival．My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes．One time，I just couldn't wait to the Spring Festival dinner．Since I was about to take a piece from a cooked duck，I see Grandma in the kitchen looking at me．Shake her head，she said，"It isn't a good time to do that，dear．"At once I apologized and controlled me at my best till the dinner started．You know，the dinner was that we had waited for several month．

Answer 1

分析 小时候，最激动的事情就是过年．祖母是世界上最棒的厨师，总能做出最好吃的菜．有一次我想偷吃她做的烤鸭，被祖母看到了．我知道要和家人一起吃，那可是等候几个月的大餐．

解答 When I was∧boy，the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival．My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes．One time，I just couldn't wait to the Spring Festival dinner．Since I was about to take a piece from a cooked duck，I see Grandma in the kitchen looking at me．Shake her head，she said，"It isn't a good time to do that，dear．"At once I apologized and controlled me at my best till the dinner started．You know，the dinner was that we had waited for several month．
详解：
1．加a；冠词错误．句意表达的是泛指，要用不定冠词来限定．
2．when去掉；句子结构错误．句中to celebrate the Spring Festival作系动词的表语，不需要加when；when加不定式构成的复合不定式短语，表示的是什么时候去做某事．
3．but改为and；连词错误．句意表达的是并列，不是转折．
4．to改为for；短语搭配错误．wait for等候．
5．Since改为When/As；连词错误．句意表达的是当…时候．
6．see改为saw；时态错误．文章讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
7．Shake改为Shaking；分词错误．句中shake与主语she之间构成主谓关系，要用现在分词形式作伴随状语．
8．me改为myself；短语搭配错误．control oneself控制自己．
9．that改为what；连词错误．句中we had waited for作系动词的表语，是一个表语从句；从句for缺少宾语，且句意指代的是物，要用what来连接．
10．month改为months；名词错误．句中有several修饰，名词要用复数．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．