Question

19．假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改．
    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
    删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
    修改：在错的词下划横线，并在该横线下面写出修改后的词．
    注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；    
         2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Last week，I，together with my friends，visited Mount Yuntai in Henan Province．It is famous as its beautiful and unique scenery．We gathered at the school gate at 7：00 am．Two hours late we arrived by bus．On arriving，we set about climb in groups．At noon，we got together at the Geological Museum to watch some exhibits，where show how geological structures form．Then we had lunch and take a break．At 2：00 pm，we continued my exploration regardless of tiredness．We met at that is called Zhuyu Peak at 4：00 pm．After taking some photos，we walked down the mountain．At 6：00 pm，we returned back to school．It was unforgettable trip．I felt excited by the amazed beauty of nature．

Answer 1

分析 文章讲述了上周我和朋友们去云台山旅行的经历．那儿的风景真美．我们一大早就出发了，到达后开始爬山，然后参观了地质博物馆．这是一次难忘的旅行．

解答 Last week，I，together with my friends，visited Mount Yuntai in Henan Province．It is famous asits beautiful and unique scenery．We gathered at the school gate at 7：00 am．Two hours late we arrived by bus．On arriving，we set about climb in groups．At noon，we got together at the Geological Museum to watch some exhibits，where show how geological structures form．Then we had lunch and take a break．At 2：00 pm，we continued my exploration regardless of tiredness．We met at that is called Zhuyu Peak at 4：00 pm．After taking some photos，we walked down the mountain．At 6：00 pm，we returned back to school．It was∧unforgettable trip．I felt excited by the amazed beauty of nature．
详解：
1．as改为for；短语搭配错误．be famous for因为…而出名．
2．late改为later；副词错误．later与时间连用，表示多长时间后．
3．climb改为climbing；动名词错误．set about doing sth着手做某事．
4．where改为which；连词错误．句中show how geological structures form修饰exhibits，是一个非限制性定语从句；从句缺少主语且先行词exhibits指物，要用which来引导．
5．take改为took；时态错误．文章讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
6．my改为our；逻辑指代错误．句意指代的是we．
7．that改为what；连词错误．句中is called Zhuyu Peak作介词at的宾语，是一个宾语从句；从句缺少主语且句意指代的是物，要用what来连接．
8．back去掉；短语搭配错误．return to回到，不能和back重复使用．
9．加an；冠词错误．句意表达的是泛指一次难忘的旅行，要用不定冠词来限定．
10．amazed改为amazing；形容词错误．句中amaze修饰名词beauty，表示事物的特征和属性，要用现在分词构成的形容词．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．