Question

【题目】假如你是李华,你的美国朋友 Tom 在学习汉语,他听说很多外国人在中国学习相声,对此非常感兴趣,来信询问有关中国相声的情况,请你给他写信回复。内容包括:

1．介绍相声;

2．相声与语言学习的关系。
注意:1．词数 100 左右;

2．可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

3．参考词汇:相声 comic talk Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

How are you doing? I'm writing in reply to your letter asking me about comic talk. Comic talk is a traditional Chinese way of entertainment. It's usually performed by two people but it can also be played by one person or more than two. The performers talk about topics of daily life in humorous ways. Comic talks not only amuse and refresh us, but also get us thinking about life.

Many foreigners learn Chinese comic talk because it is a good way to learn spoken Chinese and gives them a better understanding of Chinese culture. So I'm delighted that you are interested in it and I hope you can enjoy learning it.

Best wishes!

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。所给要点非常明确，话题也是考生比较熟悉的。比较好写。考生要先介绍相声的有关知识，比如，相声的表现形式。其次再谈谈相声和学习的关系。考生可先根据要点写出主题句，然后再适当扩展细节内容。该文应以一般现在时态为主。

【亮点分析】

所给范文要点明确，条理清楚，语言自然贴切。长短句交叉使用。适当使用了一些较好的词汇和句式：1. 被动语态It's usually performed by two people but it can also be played by one person or more than two. 2. not only…but also… 3. it is a good way to learn spoken Chinese and gives them a better understanding of Chinese culture 4. a better understanding of