Question

【题目】Shenzhen women aged 30 to 39 expressed the strong desire to have a second child after our country declared to carry out the universal twochild policy last year.

The Chinese Government loosened its onechild policy in November,2013，allowing families to have a second child if either spouse(配偶) is an only child.In 2015，the universal twochild policy was finally introduced.

According to a recent survey，a large number of families show great interest in having a second child.The majority of the hopeful mothers—76 percent—were aged 30 to 39,1 percent older than 40，and the rest aged 20 to 29，the official figures showed.

“The new policy meets people’s expectations，” said Sun Meihua，deputy director of the Shenzhen Health and Family Planning Commission.“The new policy won’t lead to a baby boom because many parents are very rational and will take birth costs and educational costs into consideration.”

写作内容

1．用约30个单词概括上文的主要内容；

2．用约120个单词就“独生子女放开政策”谈谈你的看法，内容包括：

(1)读完新闻，你对独生子女适度放开政策有什么看法？

(2)你希望自己有亲兄弟姐妹吗？

(3)你对原来的独生子女政策又有什么看法？

写作要求

1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

评分标准

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】From the news，we learn that after the Chinese Government adjusted its onechild policy，many women in Shenzhen，especially those in their 30s，applied for having a second child.

Having learnt the news，I think it wise for the government to adopt a new policy on giving birth to babies.Obviously，a rapidly ageing society means that we should call for more young people.Moreover，it can probably help achieve gender balance.

There is no doubt that many teenagers expect a brother or sister，and I’m no exception.I wish to have a sister to share my happiness and sorrow with.If I had one，I’d play with her，do sports with her and study with her.Just imagine having someone to accompany me！I’ll never be alone.

While new times call for new policy，the benefits from the onechild policy can’t be ignored.As far as I know，it has been very successful in controlling population growth，particularly in the cities.What’s more，it has helped pull people out of poverty and contributed to the improvement of their life quality greatly.

【解析】试题分析：根据文章内容，用约30个单词概括上文的主要内容，并用约120个单词就“独生子女放开政策”谈谈你的看法。本文属于提纲式作文，根据所给提纲要点，充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文属于提纲式作文，包含所要求的内容，符合题意，结构布局合理，文章使用高级句子。Having learnt the news，I think it wise for the government to adopt a new policy on giving birth to babies现在分词的完成式做状语；a rapidly ageing society means that we should call for more young people.宾语从句用在句中；The Chinese Government loosened its onechild policy in November,2013，allowing families to have a second child if either spouse(配偶) is an only child.现在分词做自然的结果状语，句中包含if引导的条件状语从句；There is no doubt that many teenagers expect a brother or sister同位语从句恰到好处；If I had one，I’d play with her，if引导的虚拟语气堪称经典；While new times call for new policy，the benefits from the onechild policy can’t be ignored While引导让步状语从句；另外，Obviously，Moreover，As far as I know，What’s more，的运用为文章增色添彩。