Question

【题目】假设你是李华。你的英语老师把你班同学分成几个小组来调查班里患近视(short-sightedness)的同学的人数和原因。你们小组调查后做了如下图所示的统计，请分析下面的饼状图，并谈谈你的看法及建议。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently, we conducted a survey on short-sightedness among the fifty students in our class. According to the survey, twenty students have good eyesight, while thirty students are short-sighted. We found that eighteen students became short-sighted due to watching TV or sitting in front of a computer for a long time. Nine students said their poor posture led to their short-sightedness. Three other students had other reasons for their poor eyesight. Thus, the main reason for short-sightedness is that some students don’t use their eyes properly.

Our eyes are very important to us. We should protect them all the time. We should not watch TV or surf the Internet for hours without breaks. We should also read in a correct way. Furthermore, doing eye exercises is good for our eyes.

【解析】考查图表类作文，话题是眼睛近视的问题，要点都已经给出，有分析现状和原因，给出建议，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，适当的增加细节，使文章更充实，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述。

亮点：

According to the survey, twenty students have good eyesight, while thirty students are short-sighted. while表示前后对比。We found that eighteen students became short-sighted due to watching TV or sitting in front of a computer for a long time.包含由that引导的宾语从句，due to引导原因状语。