Question

4．假设你是光明中学的李华，你想参加美国某大学在你校举行的"赴美交换生"的选拔赛，请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇120-150词的自我陈述．
1．参加目的；
2．兴趣特长；
3．未来打算．
生词提示：交换生exchange student．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们用英语写一篇120-150词的自我陈述，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般将来时，内容要点包括：光明中学的李华想参加美国某大学在校举行的"赴美交换生"的选拔赛，参加目的；兴趣特长；未来打算．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为参加目的；兴趣特长．第二部分为未来打算．
重点短语与句型：
play the violin拉小提琴
be good at 擅长于
get along well with 与…相处的好
 made up my mind 下定决心
make every effort todo sth尽一切努力做某事
 the key to success成功的关键
高分句型一：I'm a 15-year-old boy，who am from Guangming middle school非限制性定语从句
高分句型二：Just as the old saying goes，"no pains，no gains．谚语前常用的一句话，as the saying goes，正如谚语所说

解答 Dear editer，
I'm Li Hua．I'm  a 15-year-old boy，who am from Guangming middle school．（高分句型一）I want to join this activity because I want to improve my English and I also want to learn more about America history．I like doing sports and reading books．My favorite sport is basketball and I can play it well．I can sing and play the violin．I am good at drawing，too．I  think I can get along well with my host family．Perhaps I would like to live in a big family with pets．Because I love animals and chatting with other people．Iwill be glad if I can live in a family like this．（参加目的；兴趣特长）
I have made up my mind to make every effort to study，for I believe hard work is the key to success．Just as the old saying goes，"no pains，no gains．（高分句型二）Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time，because time and tide wait for no men．（未来打算）
Yours，
Lihua

点评 第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
 第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．
第三步：遣词造句，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．