Question

阅读下面的新闻报道，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

News report

Four young female college students died Friday after falling or jumping from a blazing room on the sixth floor of Shanghai Business School. Witness said one woman who jumped appeared to be aiming for bushes on the ground, but missed and landed on concrete. Witnesses said the other three were desperately trying to climb to another room amid roaring flames when they fell to the concrete paving.

The fire broke out in Room 602 of the seven-floor dormitory at the school’s downtown campus on Zhongshan Road West, just after 6 a.m. The fire was caused by an electrical device used to heat water. This had ignited flammable objects, police said late Friday afternoon. After receiving reports of the fire at 6:12 a.m, police, firefighters and ambulances were quickly on the scene. The fire was extinguished by 6:30 a.m., according to the school.

There is only one public toilet on each floor to get water and fire extinguishers in the dormitory were outdated, students said.  (SZ-Agencies)

[写作内容]

1． 以约30个词概括这篇报道的主要内容。

2． 针对此篇报道发表你对校园安全问题的看法, 至少包括以下内容要点，该部分词数大约120个词。

1）作为学生，我们该如何在危急的状况下保护好自己。

2）作为校方应该采取哪些措施避免此类悲剧的发生。

[写作要求]

1．作文中可使用实例或其它方法支持你的观点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接    引用原文中的句子；

2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

Answer 1

After the tears, let’s focus on dorm safety

It was reported that on November 14, a tragedy occurred in a girls’ dormitory of the Shanghai Business School. Four girls jumped from their sixth-floor balcony in an attempt to escape a fire, and lost their lives.

People expressed their sympathy after hearing the tragedy. In my opinion, this incident reflects a lack of awareness of safety procedures. Both the college and the students are responsible for it. On one hand, we students should learn to deal with an emergency calmly in daily life. If there is a crisis, we are supposed to remain calm, ensure we are safe and then call for help.

On the other hand, it is the school authorities’ obligation to take safety measures for students living in a campus. Furthermore, more lectures should be held on safety to enhance students’ awareness of the issue.

In short, to avoid similar tragedies, both sides must work together.

                         

解析:

一、读写任务评分原则

1、本试题总分为25分，分两部分给分 ① 短文概括5分 ② 主题写作 20分。

2、强调内容健康，观点鲜明，说服力强，表述清晰。可参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

3、评分时，选根据文章语言的规范、内容的合适及篇章的连贯性初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

4、语言规范：拼写与标点符号是语言规范的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。

二、内容要点

1、短文概括： 

2、主题写作：

    ① 归纳完整，表述清晰。

  ② 观点鲜明，说服力强。