Question

【题目】假如你是高三学生李华，在高考志愿的问题上你和父母的意见产生了分歧。请你写一封电子邮件向你的外教Jack 求助。要点如下：

1.现在的状况；

2.分歧的原因；

3.求助的内容；

注意：1.词数：100左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.参考词汇：高考志愿 application for university

Dear Jack,

I am writing to ask you some advice on my application for university._________________________________

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Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

I am writing to ask you some advice on my application for university. It's the final year of my senior high school. I have to decide in advance which university to apply to and what major to study. I have discussed it with my parents recently. It's a pity that we have not been able to reach an agreement. My parents would like me to choose a local university so that they can still look after me after I graduate.

However, I prefer to go to another city, where I will have the chance to experience a new life. My parents are unhappy about that. I am worried too. Should I listen to my parents or stick to my own decision?

Look forward to your reply!

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇应用文，首先根据所给情景和所给提示要点进行思路整理，列出提纲，根据提示要点文章主要分为三段，第一段交代此时此刻的写作背景，即在英语考试现场，以及表达对父母真诚的感谢；第二段写考试过后能够为父母尽的义务及孝道；第三段写宽慰父母的话及祝福语；然后根据每段的内容要点提示，有逻辑地进行叙述表达，表达过程中需要注意用适当的连接词体现出句子的逻辑；并努力绕开自己不会表达的语句，用比较有把握的句子来表达，避免过多的语法错误。最后，写完后进行检查。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇电子邮件，格式正确，语言精练，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。I have to decide in advance which university to apply to and what major to study.which/what加动词不定式作宾语；It's a pity that we have not been able to reach an agreement.使用It's a pity that---句式；My parents would like me to choose a local university so that they can still look after me after I graduate.句中使用so that引导的目的状语从句和after引导的时间状语从句；I prefer to go to another city, where I will have the chance to experience a new life.where引导定语从句；Should I listen to my parents or stick to my own decision?问句使用巧妙。