Question

【题目】作为一名高中学生，你将参加主题为“let’sridebicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：

1.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；

2.骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。

参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbonlife）；节能（energysaving）；有毒排放（poisonous emission）;交通堵塞（traffic congestion）

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Good morning,everyone.

I’m a senior middle school student. The topic of my speech is “let’s ride bicycles ”. As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transp-ort, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they also have caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jam.

How can we solve the problem then? As far as I am concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. for one thing , bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy-saving. for another , bicycles are environmentally friendly, due to the fact that they won’t give off any waste gas, which has a bad effect on people’s health. What is more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is of great benefit to our health.

Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us !

Thank you

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇演讲稿。需要用正确的英语把给出的要点准确表达出来。内容要点如下：1.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；2.骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。要注意书写，认真查验是否有漏写情况等。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了同位语从句due to the fact that they won’t give off any waste gas,和定语从句 which has a bad effect on people’s health.以及for another、What is more和Therefore等过度词语，使文章更加生动而流畅。