Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你班外教Ms. King任教期满即将回国。作为班长，你将代表班级在告别会上发言致谢，并赠送纪念品。内容包括：

1．感激之情；

2．礼物寓意；

3．美好祝愿。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Hi, everybody,

On this special occasion, I feel much honored

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Thank you very much!

Answer 1

【答案】Hi, everybody,

On this special occasion, I feel much honored to represent the class to express our sincere gratitude to Ms. King for her excellent work.

Thanks to Ms. King’s generous help as well as her great devotion and efforts, we’ve become more interested and done better in our English, which will be of great importance to our further study. Ms. King, here’s a pen container, a souvenir that we’ve specially prepared for you. Hopefully you’ll like it. This pen container is made of bamboo, which is evergreen and hollow inside so that in Chinese culture it’s a symbol of being young and modest. What makes it special is that we’ve all signed on it, making it a good reminder of the happy time we spent together. Now, I’d also like to wish you a pleasant journey home and always young and happy!

Thank you very much!

【解析】

这是一篇应用文写作。

第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华，你班外教Ms. King任教期满即将回国。作为班长，你将代表班级在告别会上发言致谢，并赠送纪念品。内容包括：1．感激之情；2．礼物寓意；3．美好祝愿。

第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：honored to（荣幸）；express our sincere gratitude（表达诚挚的感谢）；generous（大方的）；be of great importance（重要的）；a symbol of（……的象征）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。