Question

我校与韩国某中学是友好学校，对方校刊来信想了解我校本学期选修课开设情况。请根据下表提供的学生问卷调查得到的信息，用英语写一篇报导。

课程门类	上课时间	最受欢迎的课	对课程的看法	建  议
二十余种 (学生可任选)	每周三和周五 下午 3:30—4:50	计算机 英语口语 艺术等	1．十分感兴趣 2．学到许多课外 的知识 3．有大量的实践 机会	1．增加选修课 2．减少作业量 3．多组织参观， 了解社会

要求：1．报导需包括表内提供的所有内容。2．词数100--120左右。报导题目已给出。

词汇：optional course 选修课

Students Like Optional Courses

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                                

                                                                               

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Students Like Optional Courses

This term our school has offered more than 20 optional courses, from which students can choose. The courses are given from 3:30pm to 4:50pm on Wednesday and Friday every week. And we students have benefited a lot from them.

In our school, students take great interest in the optional courses. Their favorites are computer, spoken English, arts and so on. They say they have learned much that is not taught in textbooks and they have got a great deal of practice. However, students are not quite satisfied. They hope more optional courses will be offered while their home-work should be less. They suggest that more trips and visits should be organized. Only in this way can they learn more about what is going on outside school. （126 words）

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类作文，，要点都已经给出，要求关于选修课开设情况写一篇报导，根据下表提供的学生问卷调查得到的信息写作，并同时提出自己建议。包括1．课程门类；2．上课时间； 3．最受欢迎的课；4.对课程的看法审题时注意本文使用的时态，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述。如范文里面的They say they have learned much that is not taught in textbooks and they have got a great deal of practice..和Only in this way can they learn more about what is going on outside school.还有要用适当的关联词把文章串联起来：象however,等等。

考点：考查提纲类短文写作。

点评：提纲类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，词汇句型的选用，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。