Question

14．假如你们班将要对"良好的饮食习惯"这一话题进行讨论．请根据下列提示，用英语写一篇发言稿．内容要点应包括：
1．同学中存在的一些不良的饮食习惯．
2．如何建立良好的饮食习惯．
3．个人看法．
注意：
1．发言稿必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥．
2．发言稿开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
词数：120左右   
参考词汇：偏食：be particular about    零食：snack
Dear classmates，
As we all know，it is very important for us to form healthy eating habits___________________________________________________________________________________
That's all．Thank you！

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Some of us often go to school without breakfast； some like to have snacks； some others are particular about food； and still some eat or drink too much．（高分句型一）句中使用了三个并列句；
To keep fit，we should have various healthy diets，which generally include proper amounts of fish，meat，vegetables，fruit as well as main food．（高分句型二）句中To keep fit作目的状语，which引导的非限制性定语从句
Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better．（高分句型三）only+状语句子使用半倒装结构

解答 As we all know，it's very important for us to form healthy eating habits．However，bad eating habits are still very common among us students．Some of us often go to school without breakfast； some like to have snacks； some others are particular about food； and still some eat or drink too much．（高分句型一） All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health．（不良的饮食习惯）
     To keep fit，we should have various healthy diets，which generally include proper amounts of fish，meat，vegetables，fruit as well as main food．（高分句型二）Besides，we'd better have meals regularly．（如何建立良好的饮食习惯）
     In my opinion，we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body．Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better．（高分句型三）（个人看法）That's all．Thank you!

点评 本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．