Question

【题目】你是张伟的好朋友John ，张伟即将参加学校的英语朗诵比赛，向你求助，请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。

比赛之前：认真准备：如平时可对着镜子练习；用语简练，使评委印象深刻。

比赛时：保持微笑；忘词时不紧张，继续演讲。

写作内容：

1．说明回信的意图；

2．向张伟提出建议；

3．预祝张伟比赛成功。

Dear Zhangwei,

……

Yours，

John

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Zhangwei,

You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you . In my opinion, you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror.

Besides, you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges. When you are giving the speech , remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words , don’t be panic and just continue your speech , because no one will notice it. Wish you success in the speech.

Yours,

John

【解析】

试题分析：你是张伟的好朋友John ，张伟即将参加学校的英语朗诵比赛，向你求助，请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。比赛之前：认真准备：如平时可对着镜子练习；用语简练，使评委印象深刻。

比赛时：保持微笑；忘词时不紧张，继续演讲。写作内容：1．说明回信的意图；2．向张伟提出建议；3．预祝张伟比赛成功。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯.要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you .运用了并列句，同时也使用了限制性定语从句；In my opinion, you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practicingbefore a mirror.本句运用了含情态动词的被动语态；Besides, you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges.目的状语从句运用的恰到好处；When you are giving the speech , remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words , don’t be panic and just continue your speech , because no one will notice it.时间状语从句，让步状语从句，原因状语从句和祈使句完美结合。