Question

【题目】假设你是李华，是你校模拟联合国大会主席。你校将举办第五次模联活动，请给你们的外教Smith老师写封信，邀请他担任指导老师（advisor）。

信的内容包括：

1.主题：全球气候；

2.举办时间和地点；

3.指导老师的任务。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

模拟联合国大会MUN

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

Our school is going to hold the fifth Model United Nations on November 10 and 11 in Meeting Rooms One, Two and Three. The theme is global climate. We sincerely invite you to be one of the advisors.

There are some new members in MUN, and the process, how to prepare for MUN and how to write the position paper, etc. are too complicated for them. Therefore, advisors are needed to train them. Besides, in order to improve their English, some teams are determined to use English as their work language. How to express themselves properly and correctly and correctly in oral or written English is a problem. So we are in great need of native English speakers as our advisors. I know you are a MUN lover. Do come and join us.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：试题为应用文中的书信写作，试题只给出写作框架，并未给出所有的具体写作细节，为提纲式作文。写好此文，需注意三点：一是写信格式要准确，信的开头已经给出，但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当，本文信的内容包括：1.主题：全球气候；2.举办时间和地点；3.指导老师的任务。三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。另外，在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封书信，格式正确，语言精练，布局合理，同时句中使用高级句子。There are some new members in MUN, and the process, how to prepare for MUN and how to write the position paper, etc. are too complicated for them.there be 句型和疑问词加动词不定式在句中巧妙结合；in order to improve their English, some teams are determined to use English as their work language.动词不定式做目的状语；How to express themselves properly and correctly and correctly in oral or written English is a problem.疑问词加动词不定式在句中做主语，堪称经典；Do come and join us.强调谓语，起到画龙点睛之妙；另外，Therefore, Besides,的运用为文章增色添彩。