Question

【题目】假如你校最近就家长应该如何对待孩子的问题进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1中提供的信息描述调查结果，并针对图表2的其中一个数据所反映的情况写出你的看法。

注意：1．文章的开头已经给出。

2．词数不少于120左右。

生词：图表 chart

Recently our school has conducted a survey among the students about how parents treat their

children.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Recently our school has conducted a survey among the students about how parents treat their children.

According to Chart 1, three behaviors from parents are considered most welcome among the students 33.5% of the students feel happy that their parents trust them, laying a basic foundation for family communication. 31.7% are content to be in the equal position with their parents when they are talking with each other. What’s more, 22.7% feel happy to receive constant praise or encouragement from their parents.

As is shown in Chart 2,32% of the students think their parents expect too much of them, especially in their studies, putting great pressure on them. While all parents love their children and want the best for them, with too much pressure, however, some children will feel they have failed if they are not accepted at a top school or university.

I think parents should have practical expectations for their children. This way, the children will feel more confident about themselves and really make a difference in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：假如你校最近就家长应该如何对待孩子的问题进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1中提供的信息描述调查结果，并针对图表2的其中一个数据所反映的情况写出你的看法。表一，我最喜欢父母对带我的3种行为：表扬我22.75%；信任我33.5%；能和我平等交谈31.7%。表二，我最不满意父母对待我的3种行为：总训斥我23.4%；管得太多37.6%；期待太高32%。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯.要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。一定要写出你自己的看法。注意：1．文章的开头已经给出。2．词数不少于120左右。

【亮点说明】Recently our school has conducted a survey among the students about how parents treat their children.现在完成时态和介词的宾语从句完美结合；According to Chart 1, three behaviors from parents are considered most welcome among the students 33.5% of the students feel happy that their parents trust them, laying a basic foundation for family communication.被动语态，宾语从句和现在分词作结果状语巧妙搭配；As is shown in Chart 2,32% of the students think their parents expect too much of them, especially in their studies, putting great pressure on them. As引导的非限制性定语从句；While all parents love their children and want the best for them, with too much pressure, however, some children will feel they have failed if they are not accepted at a top school or university.让步状语从句和条件状语从句同时出现在一句中；I think parents should have practical expectations for their children.句中运用了宾语从句表达了自己的看法。