Question

请以中学生的名义写一篇文章呼吁世界各地的中学生加入到拯救大熊猫（the giant panda) 的行列中来。内容包括：

大熊猫是中国的稀有动物， 也是世界的稀有动物之一，为中国人民和世界人民所喜爱；

大熊猫生长在山里，以竹子为食，由于山林遭到破坏，竹子被砍伐，大熊猫觅食越来越困难，正濒临灭绝；

我国已建立数个自然保护区来保护大熊猫，但需要更多的资金。

注意：1. 词数120左右；

      2. 要求用到提示内容，但不要逐字翻译；

      3. 行文连贯、流畅、完整。

                                                                                          

                                                                                          

                                                                                          

                                                                                          

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

    The giant panda is not only a rare animal in China but also one of the rarest animals on the earth. It is loved by people all over the world.

    The home of the giant panda is in the mountains, where it feeds on the tender bamboo leaves. As more and more forests are being destroyed and most of the bamboo has been cut down, it is becoming more and more difficult for giant pandas to find food for themselves. To save pandas, China has set up some nature reserves. But more money is needed to carry out this important rescue project.

    It is our eager hope that people who care for the conservation of rare animals will lend us a hand to help save giant pandas, so that they can live with us forever.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇材料作文。要求写一篇呼吁拯救大熊猫的文章。写作要点已经给出，作文时，要把所有要点都包含在内，注意使用连接词来衔接上下句和前后文。可以分三部分来写。第一段总写，介绍大熊猫；第二段写大熊猫的生活习性；第三段总结，呼吁大家行动起来保护大熊猫。使用第一人称，使作文比较客观真实；时态的使用要正确，尽量使用一些重点的语法知识。

【亮点说明】范文使用了短语、固定搭配not only...but also, all over the world, for themselves, set up, carry out, lend us a hand, care for等，可以看出，基础知识掌握扎实；范文使用了被动语态It is loved by..., more money is needed等，使意思的表达更客观，更有说服力；范文使用了非限制性定语从句where it feeds on the tender bamboo leaves和限制性定语从句who care for the conservation；固定句型one of the+最高级+名词复数；As more and more forests are being destroyed随着.......；主语从句It is our eager hope that...和目的状语从句so that they can...。

考点：材料作文