Question

20．假设你是李华，在纽约学习期间，到当地一家商店购买了一台随身听，但回到住处后发现了"播放"键失灵．请你按以下内容要点用英文给商店经理写一封信．
1．离店时的情况；
2．使用时的问题；
3．该物品的用处；
4．对商店的要求．
参考词汇：随身听：walkman
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．信的开头与结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）．
Dear Manager，
I'm one of your customers．       
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
The problem is that the"Play"key now doesn't work at all． 问题是那个播放键根本不起作用
高分句型二：
You see，a walkwan is of great use for me to learn English and I cann't wait too long before this problem is solved．你知道的，一个随身听对于我的英语学习是有很大帮助的，我希望这个问题很快就能得到解决
句型一 that the"Play"key now doesn't work at all 该句是一个由that引导的表语从句，that在从句中只作引导词，不充当句子成分
句型二 ①a walkwan is of great use for me to learn English  该句谓语部分使用了一个重要句型：be of+great+n=be+very+adj 
            ②before this problem is solved 该句是一个由before 引导的时间状语从句

解答 Dear Manager，
   I'm one of your customers．The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop．Before I left，I did check it carefully and everything was all right．When I got home，however，I found a fault with it．The problem is that the"Play"key now doesn't work at all．（高分句型一）（情况说明）It may not be so big but I can't see why．Probably it's not your fault and nor is it mine．Anyhow，I can't solve be problem in person．
   You see，a walkwan is of great use for me to learn English and I cann't wait too long before this problem is solved．（高分句型二）Hopefully you'll deal with the walkwan without delay，when you receive my letter．（提出希望）
   Hoping to hear from you in the earliest possible time!
Yours sincerely，
 Li hua

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文一般规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．