Question

假设你是李华。你的英国笔友John写信告诉你近日他由于沉迷于电脑游戏，健康受到很大影响。他十分焦虑。请你根据以下要点提示，给他写一封回信，建议他养成良好的生活习惯。
要点如下：
1．限制玩游戏的时间，把精力逐渐转移到其他事情上；
2．规定起床和睡觉的时间，形成良好的作息习惯；
3．每天锻炼半小时，增强体质。
注意：1.词数100左右；   2．开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John，
I’m sorry to hear that you’re addicted to computer games which have had a bad influence on your health.
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Yours faithfully,
Xiao Hua

Answer 1

Dear John,  
I’m sorry to hear that you’ve addicted to computer games which have had a bad influence on your health. I know you worry about it very much. As a good friend, I’m willing to give you some advice. Firstly, you should limit the time that you spend playing computer games and pay more attention to other things. Secondly, you should get up and go to bed at a specific time so that you can form a habit of getting up and going to bed regularly. Thirdly, you should do exercise for about half an hour every day to strengthen your body. I do hope you can get rid of computer games and form a healthy lifestyle.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.

解析根据要点写一封回信，首先要明确要点所涉及的信息及关系，其次注意恰当的使用关联词，例如，firstly, secondly, thirdly或是比较复杂的，像是to begin with, then, finally.再次，句式的选择。借助从句的应用，让阅卷人感觉应试者有较为深厚的语法功底和极好的语言表现力。
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【亮点说明】
如要点中“限制玩游戏的时间”可以处理成you should limit the time that you spend playing computer games，“规定起床和睡觉的时间，形成良好的作息习惯；”可以处理成 you should get up and go to bed at a specific time so that you can form a habit of getting up and going to bed regularly.以上均是借助从句的应用，显示出作者扎实的写作功底。