Question

3．假如你是李华，Jane 是美国人．在她暑假来中国游玩时你们相识，并成为好朋友．Jane回国后，你很想念她．现请你根据以下要点提示，用英语给她写一封信，和她谈一谈你高中的新生活．
（1）校园环境；
（2）老师、同学；
（3）你的感受和打算．
注意：（1）文中不得出现真实的人名或地名；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）词数100左右．书信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Jane，
How's everything going？      ．
I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文，根据题目要求可知用第一人称来叙述，时态以一般现在时态为主．内容包括一点明写信目的；二学校的情况；三感受和打算．
高分句型：
1．My teachers are all kind and I believe I'll make great progress with them teaching me．（with+n+doing构成复合结构，做句子的原因状语）
我的老师都很和蔼，我相信在他们的教导下，我会取得很大的进步．
2．I've decided to work hard so that I'll have a bright future（so that引导目的状语从句，表示"为了以便于"）．
我下决心要努力学习，以便于有一个光明的未来．

解答 Dear Jane，
How's everything going？ I'm glad to have met you and become friends with you．I miss you very much and thus I'm writing to tell you something about my new life at senior high school（点明写信目的）．
My new school is as beautiful as a huge garden．There're green trees and grass and colorful flowers everywhere．My teachers are all kind and I believe I'll make great progress with them teaching me（高分句型一）．My classmates are very friendly and I've made many new friends here（学校的情况）．I feel that my new life is very exciting，but I also realize that it is full of challenges．I've decided to work hard so that I'll have a bright future（高分句型二）．Of course，I'll also do more exercise to keep fit．（感受和打算）（120 words）
I'm looking forward to your reply．

点评 写作时要注意使用高级的词汇和复杂的句型，也要适当地使用关联词承前启后，用词要得体，符合语言环境．例如To begin with，In addition，Last but not least，使文章更加连贯．