Question

【题目】为了减少环境污染、缓解城市交通压力，2018年1月1日我市开始实施新的机动车限号行驶规定（the license number-plate restrictions)。假定你最近就我市实施这一新规定进行了采访，请用英语写一篇短文,向某英语报投稿。内容包括：

1. 限号带来的好处；

2. 限号存在的问题；

3. 你的看法及改进建议。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently I made a survey on the new license number-plate restrictions which have been adopted in our city since January 1, 2018.

Many people agree that the system to some extent, has reduced the environment pollution and relieved the pressure of transportation. However, every coin has two sides. Many car owners complain that it is annoying that they are not allowed to drive their own cars, especially when something is urgent.

In my opinion, for the benefit of the public, it is worthwhile to sacrifice part of personal convenience. However, I think it will be better if that government provide more means of public transportation for citizens and reduce the fans.

【解析】这是一篇典型的议论文体的写作。本题给了一个话题，以提纲的形式提出了论点（限号带来的好处及存在的问题）及需要考生自由发挥的部分（你的看法及改进意见）。对于限号的好处及存在的问题，没有具体给出。自己的看法可选择上述中的任何一种，并就此发表个人的见解。此题给了学生一定的想象空间，有利于学生的发挥。本文可用三段成文形式成文。

亮点分析：本文句式灵活多变，复杂句运用恰到好处，在复杂句中含有定语从句，名词从句及状语从句。语言比较严谨，运用了较高级的语法结构。同时文中还运用了许多较高级的词汇，如to some extent, every coin has two sides, In my opinion，for the benefit of the public，it is worthwhile to do, sacrifice part of personal convenience. Provide…for…等。文章结构如下：

第一段提出话题。在本段中运用一个由which引导的定语从句… which have been adopted in our city since January 1, 2018.

第二段主要叙述限号的好处及存在的问题。运用一个宾语从句来表达出限号的好处。（Many people agree that the system to some extent, has reduced the environment pollution and relieved the pressure of transportation. ）接着用转折连词However，引出限号存在的问题时运用一句谚语“ every coin has two sides.”来说明任何事情都有利有弊，再用一个复杂句（Many car owners complain that it is annoying that they are not allowed to drive their own cars, especially when something is urgent.）说明其存在的问题。

最后一段提出自己的看法及改进意见。在本段中运用一个常用句式“it is worthwhile to do something”及复杂句（I think it will be better if that government provide more mans of public transportation for citizens and reduce the fans.）。这个复杂句是一个宾语从句中含有一个由if引导的状语从句。