Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I’m writing to tell you something about the discussion on if it is necessary for senior one student to take the one-week military training. Students’ views on it varies from person to person.

Some held that it is necessary. On one hand, it can improve students’ teamwork spirit, who will play an important part in their life and study. On the other hand, it is no doubt that they become stronger physically and mentally through the training.

Besides, the others have opposite views. They think it is waste of time. Meanwhile, students get burnt easy without any protection in the sun.

As far as I’m concerned about, though we may feel tired during the training, it goes without saying that the one-week military training is meaningful.

Answer 1

【答案】1.if→whether 2.student→students 3.varies→ vary 4.held→hold 5.who→which 6.it→there 7.Besides→However 8.waste前加a 9.easy→easily 10.去掉about

【解析】

本文是议论文。文章论述了高一的学生关于是否有必要进行为期一周的军训。

1.考查从属连词。在介词后，应用whether表示“是否”，不用if。故if改为whether。

2.考查名词复数。根据句意，senior one student“高一学生”，应该是很多学生，因此用复数形式。故student改为students。

3.考查主谓一致。句子主语Students’ views是复数，谓语动词应该用复数形式。故varies改为vary。

4.考查动词时态。句子叙述的是客观事实，应该用一般现在时。故held改为hold。

5.考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知，此处是非限定性定语从句，先行词是students’ teamwork spirit，指事物，关系词在从句中作主语，应该用which引导。故who改为which。

6.考查固定句型。句型There is no doubt that…“毫无疑问”。故it改为there。

7.考查副词。上一段是说明支持的观点；根据the others have opposite views.可知，该段说明反对的观点，因此两段之间是转折关系，应用however表示转折。故Besides改为However。

8.考查固定短语。固定短语：a waste of …“……的浪费”。故waste前加a。

9.考查副词。修饰谓语动词短语get burnt，应用副词形式。故easy改为easily。

10.考查固定短语。固定短语：as far as I’m concerned“就我而言，在我看来”，不需要介词abut。故去掉about。