Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My aunt was a smoker for long time.I couldn't stand smell the cigarettes in her breath I loved her very much,but I hate being around her.That I did was telling my parents about my feelings.They understood me,but told me that they would say anything to her about it.My parent told her I loved her so much that I was worried about her health. My aunt gradually kicked her addiction of smoking by chewing gum,and eventual quit altogether!It made everyone much more happier when we were together.

Answer 1

【答案】1.for后加a

2.smell→smelling

3.hate→hated

4.That→What

5.but→and

6.anything→something

7.parent→parents

8.of→to

9.eventual→eventually

10.去掉more

【解析】1.for a long time很久，很长时间，固定搭配，做句子的时间状语。故加上a.

2.stand doing忍受做某事，是固定搭配。故把smell改为smelling.

3.根据句子时态可知该句也应该用一般现在时，hate形式不对，应该用过去式hated。故把hate改为hated.

4.That I did在句中是主语从句，句中缺少did的宾语，应该用what 做从句中的宾语，引导这一从句。故把That改为What.

5.根据句意可判断此处表示“他们很理解我，并且告诉我他们会跟姑姑说的”，因此前后分句是并列关系。故把but改为and.

6. anything表示任何事，本句表示“他们会跟姑姑谈这件事”，应该用something about it。故把anything改为something.

7.根据上句提到my parents，因此此句同样表示“父母亲”，应该用parents.故把parent改为parents.

8.表示“对…的瘾”应该用addiction to sth.，故把of改为to.

9.此处应该用副词修饰动词quit，eventual的副词形式为eventually.故把eventual改为eventually.

10.happy的比较级为happier，more多余。故把more去掉。