Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李华，你在某英文报纸上看到一个去山里植树的活动的英文广告，你想加入该活动，请根据以下提示用英语给主办方写信询问相关信息：

1. 年龄要求；

2. 住宿问题；

3. 如何到达目的地；

4. 活动的日期及持续时间。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 信的开头语已为你写好；

4. 参考词汇：log cabin 小木屋。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inquire the information about the “Caring for Our Forests” environmental programme.

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dir Sir/ Madam,

I am writing to inquire the information about the “Caring for Our Forests” environmental programme. I feel interested and want to join the team project. However, I have something uncertain to confirm.

Firstly, I would like to know the dates of the tree-planting programme. How long does it last? Secondly, could you please tell me more about the accomodation you offer? I would like to know if I have to share a room with other people. You also say in your advertisement that the log cabins are among the mountains. Do you provide a car or something to get to the place where the log cabins are? Last but not least, I wonder whether there is an age limit.

Thank you for your help. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours faithfully.

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文要求李华在某英文报纸上看到一个去山里植树的活动的英文广告，想加入该活动，请根据以下提示用英语给主办方写信询问相关信息。要点包括：年龄要求；住宿问题；如何到达目的地；活动的日期及持续时间。故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：定语从句you offer和where the log cabins are；宾语从句1.if I have to share a room with other people. 2. that the log cabins are among the mountains. 3.whether there is an age limit。 uncertain to confirm，look forward to等词汇及Firstly, Secondly, Last but not least 等连接词。