Question

9．21世纪英文报社准备举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：街舞（hiphop），烹饪（cooking），武术（Kung fu），护理（nursing）．假如你是王晓华，写一封申请信给编辑，报名参加其中一门课程的学习．信的内容必须包括：
1、你感兴趣的课程；
2、你期望从这门课程中学到什么；
3、为什么想学这些内容．
注窻：1、文章词数为120词左右；
2、信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数． Dear editor，
I am very glad that the English Summer Camp will be held，which consists of many courses，such as hiphop，cooking，Kung fu，nursing and so on．______ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Wang Xiaohua．

Answer 1

分析 本文属于提纲类写作，根据所提供的材料给编辑部写一封申请信，写作要点包括：1、你感兴趣的课程；2、你期望从这门课程中学到什么；3、为什么想学这些内容．
写作时以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主要时态．
重点词汇：dreamt of （梦想）；For one thing…，For another…（一方面…，另一方面…）；to take good care of （好好照顾）；As is known to all（众所周知）；devote…to（将…奉献给）；making full use of （充分利用）
高分句型：1．For one thing，I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of nursing so that it can help me to major in nursing after attending college．For another，learning more about nursing can help to take good care of my parents and relatives．
                运用"For one thing…，For another…"使表达更加清晰有层次．
                 2．①Nursing is a difficult task in fact，②because it needs a lot of patience and skills． 
                  ①动名词短语作主语，谓语动词用单数；②because引导一个原因状语从句．

解答 Dear Editor，
I am very glad that the English Summer Camp will be held，which consists of many courses，such as hip-hop，cooking，kung fu and nursing．I want to attend the course about nursing，because I have always dreamt of becoming a nurse since I was a little child．
For one thing，I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of nursing so that it can help me to major in nursing after attending college．For another，learning more about nursing can help to take good care of my parents and relatives（高分句型一）．
As is known to all，there are many senior citizens in China．Therefore，I want to devote my life to looking after them after I graduate from college．Nursing is a difficult task in fact，because it needs a lot of patience and skills（高分句型二）．So I hope I can learn some basic knowledge of nursing by making full use of this chance．
Yours，
Wang Xiaohua

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否覆盖了所给要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，使得上下文意思连贯，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，使文章浅显易懂，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．