Question

14．国际旅游成为当今世界飞速发展的一个产业，然而不幸的是，国际旅游制造的不同文化间的紧张比相互理解要多，请你就这一现象分析原因，并提出自己的建议．
注意：1．词数100左右．
2．参考词汇：紧张 tension．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
However，many people maintain that traveling to other parts of the world creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures．
然而，许多人认为到世界的其他地方旅行创造紧张氛围而不是来自不同文化背景的人们之间的理解力．
高分句型二：
Besides，the increase of international tourists will directly lead to the rise of prices，the problem of traffic congestion，and the worsening of environment．
此外，国际游客的增加将直接导致房价的上涨，交通拥堵问题，和环境的恶化．

解答 Traveling around the world is not only an effective way for people to ease tension in daily life and work，but also is a direct way to explore the wonder of the world and other cultures．Nowadays international tourism has become a rapidly developing industry．However，many people maintain that traveling to other parts of the world creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures（高分句型一）．I think there are some valid points in this argument．
The difference in language，culture，customs，and lifestyle often results in conflicts between tourists and local residents．People from various cultures often have different attitudes towards the same thing or behavior，thus causing further misunderstanding．Besides，the increase of international tourists will directly lead to the rise of prices，the problem of traffic congestion，and the worsening of environment（高分句型二）．So it is not strange for international tourists to sense the obvious hostility from local inhabitants．
Wonderful as it seems to be，the negative aspects of the international tourism cannot be overlooked．Anyone going to another country should be taught to observe local customs and understand the conventional wisdoms of that country．Otherwise a well-intentioned vacation may turn out to be a nightmare．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．