Question

19．某英文报"健康生活"栏目正在讨论有关健康食品、体育锻炼与少年儿童肥胖的问题．右侧六幅图是李明一年中的变化，请根据李明的情况写一篇短文．
注意：1．词数不少于60．   2．短文的开头已给出．
提示词语：junk food 好吃但不利于健康的食品     snacks 各种零食

Answer 1

分析 本文属于看图作文．由图可以看出李明本是一健康孩子，但他从一年前开始大吃垃圾食品及各种零食，躺在沙发上看电视，缺少体育锻练，以至于上楼时气喘嘘嘘，后来他注意调节饮食，加强体育锻练，又变成了一个健康孩子．要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字，再根据这些要点谋篇布局．要求考生把看到的图画用文字表达出来，除了能表达清楚图画中的信息外，考生还需要根据词数要求，适当拓展并发挥想象，从而使文章的叙述不单调．如果是记叙文类的写作素材，考生要注意故事的时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、过程、结果这六个要素；本文属于记叙文，而且叙述的是过去发生的事情，故使用一般过去时．
【亮点说明】本句中的连接词使用较为合理，如besides，as a result等；同时本句中的高级句式也较多：he spent a lot of time lying on the sofa，watching TV，and did little exercise．和What a terrible thing!这个感叹句；以及定语从句 Those who are facing the same problem，why not have a try？高级词汇如：break away，obesity等等．
Li Ming used to be a healthy boy，but over a year ago，he got into the habit of eating a lot of junk food and snacks．（高分句型一）
As a result，he put on so much weight that he found it difficult to climb the stairs．（高分句型二）
He also took part in various sports activities such as swimming，skating，running and playing basketball．（高分句型三）

解答 A healthy diet and regular exercise may help to prevent obesity（肥胖） among children．Take Li Ming for example．Li Ming used to be a healthy boy，but over a year ago，he got into the habit of eating a lot of junk food and snacks．（高分句型一）Besides，he spent a lot of time lying on the sofa，watching TV，and did little exercise．As a result，he put on so much weight that he found it difficult to climb the stairs．（高分句型二）So Li Ming decided to change the unhealthy life style．He began to have balanced，healthy diet．He also took part in various sports activities such as swimming，skating，running and playing basketball．（高分句型三）Months later，Li Ming became as fit as before．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．