Question

8．Chinese students celebrates their birthdays in different ways．And the most common way was to hold a birthday party，on which friends get together to have fun drinking，singing and dancing．On the birthday，one usually accepts nice gifts and good wishes from friends and parents．Sometimes parents will prepare a special dinner or a cake to show their love for their children．However，most children are looking forward to spending their own birthdays and enjoy themselves．Though birthday celebration is one of the important activity in one's life，it can be done in some more meaningful ways．For example，we can buy some flower or cook a delicious meal for our parents．Only in this way we express thanks to our parents in return for their love and care．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要介绍中国学生是如何庆祝他们的生日的，并提出了一些庆祝生日的方法来回报对父母的爱和关心．

解答 Chinese students celebrates their birthdays in different ways．And the most common way was to hold a birthday party，onwhich friends get together to have fun drinking，singing and dancing．On the birthday，one usually accepts nice gifts and good wishes from friends and parents．Sometimes parents will prepare∧a special dinner or a cake to show their love for their children．However，most children are looking forward to spending their own birthdays and enjoy themselves．Though birthday celebration is one of the important activity in one's life，it can be done in some more meaningful ways．For example，we can buy some flower or cook a delicious meal for our parents．Only in this way∧we express thanks to our parents in return for their love and care．
详解：
1．celebrates改为celebrate 考查主谓一致．主语students是复数，谓语动词也要用复数形式．
2．was改为is 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是一般事实，要用一般现在时态．
3．on改为at 考查介词．这是一个非限制性定语从句，at the party意为"在聚会上"，用介词at．
4．accepts改为receives 考查词语用法．accept表示主动接受，receive表示被动接受，此处应是被动接受．
5．加for 考查介词．prepare for意为"（使）为…作准备"，是固定搭配．
6．enjoy改为enjoying 考查动名词．and是并列连词，它前后连接两个相同的语法成分，spending和enjoying作look forward to的并列宾语．
7．Though改为Since/As 考查连词．此处表示原因，用连词Since/As，而非让步关系．
8．activity改为activities 考查名词复数．one of意为"…之一"，后接名词复数．
9．flower改为flowers 考查名词复数． flower是可数名词，前面有some修饰时要用复数形式．
10．加can 考查倒装．only+状语放在句首时，要作倒装句，根据前文加情态动词can表示倒装．

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