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17．为了增强学生体质，你们学校发起了"我运动，我健康"（I love sports，I enjoy health）的活动．请你向某英语报社投稿，介绍此项活动的开展情况及其影响．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
To improve students'physical health，our school has recently launched a campaign called"I love sports，I enjoy health"．（高分句型一）
There are a variety of activities available for all the students to participate in．For example，basketball lovers can join the basketball club，where they are trained by experienced coaches and compete in a series of matches．（高分句型二）Swimming lovers can go to the newly-built swimming pool and whoever prefers working out indoors can go to the gym to work up a sweat．（高分句型三）You can also see a large group of students jogging on the playground every afternoon．
All the activities are very popular with us students．They not only build up our body but also boost our academic performances．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于开放类作文，根据提示信息为了增强学生体质，你们学校发起了"我运动，我健康"（I love sports，I enjoy health）的活动．请你向某英语报社投稿，介绍此项活动的开展情况及其影响，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点：介绍此项活动的开展情况及其影响2、要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：a variety of 各种各样；participate in参加；a series of一系列；are very popular with 受欢迎；not only，but also不仅，而且；build up our body强身健体；
To improve students'physical health，our school has recently launched a campaign called"I love sports，I enjoy health"．（高分句型一）
For example，basketball lovers can join the basketball club，where they are trained by experienced coaches and compete in a series of matches．（高分句型二）
Swimming lovers can go to the newly-built swimming pool and whoever prefers working out indoors can go to the gym to work up a sweat．（高分句型三）

解答 To improve students'physical health，our school has recently launched a campaign called"I love sports，I enjoy health"．（高分句型一）
       There are a variety of activities available for all the students to participate in．For example，basketball lovers can join the basketball club，where they are trained by experienced coaches and compete in a series of matches．（高分句型二）Swimming lovers can go to the newly-built swimming pool and whoever prefers working out indoors can go to the gym to work up a sweat．（高分句型三）You can also see a large group of students jogging on the playground every afternoon．
       All the activities are very popular with us students．They not only build up our body but also boost our academic performances．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．