Question

请根据下列提示写用英语一篇120词左右的短文.

Everybody can’t live happily and healthily without other’s help. As a result , we should be grateful to our parents, teachers and friends. Now write an article “Learn to be grateful”. Your composition should include the following points:

1.       why should you be grateful?

2.       to whom  and for what  should  you give thanks  ?

3.       How will you be grateful to other people by giving one or two examples?

Learn to be grateful

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Everybody can’t live happily and healthily without other’s help. As a result , we should be grateful to our parents, teachers and friends. Who shall we give our thanks to? I’d like to share my idea with you.

First, we should clarify why we are expected to learn to be grateful. Being grateful has always been a good quality in China, which can inspire a sense of responsibility in us. And I always think if everyone is grateful to our society, it will be more harmonious. If everyone has got a grateful heart to our parents, teachers and friends, love and happiness will greet us everyday.

Gratitude is so important and necessary that we should take action right away. Gratitude doesn't necessarily consist in how much money we spend or how great our deeds should be. We can just start with small things — give our parents a warm hug or make them a cup of tea, design beautiful thank-you cards for our dear teachers and send thank-you emails to our friends .

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类作文的写作。文章的要点是以英语提示给出来的，考生需要做的就是根据要点进行回答，包括：为什么要感激？向谁表示感谢？怎样感谢并举一两个例子说明，注意改变文章的样式。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。如：Being grateful has always been a good quality in China, which can inspire a sense of responsibility in us.要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，First,second等词使文章成为一个整体。

考点：考查提纲类作文

点评：提纲类作文的关键在于表达方式的选择和要点的完备，不能有遗漏或者省略。因为本文的要求是不能写出提纲式，所以在写作的时候要变换句式，要写得更为亲切直白。不要过去堆砌。