Question

【题目】书面表达
假如你是校学生会主席，为了更好地保护环境，你代表学生会向全校学生发出倡议。请根据以下内容，写一份倡议书：1保护环境是我们的职责。
2我们要养成环保的习惯：(1)尽量步行上学或骑自行车上学(2)离开房间前关灯和其他电器(3)不随地扔垃圾(4）节约用水
3发出环保的号召。
注意：1 词数：120左右 2 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
参考词汇：电器electrical applicance（可数名词）
Dear friends，
As we can see, the environment around us is getting worse and worse.

Thank you!
The students’ Union

Answer 1

【答案】Dear friends，
As we can see, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. Our life and health have been affected greatly.The earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it, not only for ourselves but also for our future generations. Fortunately, more and more people have become aware of this problem.Many effective meaures have been taken to deal with it by the government.
I think we should follow the following advice. First, go to school on foot or by bike as often as possible. Second, turn off the light and other electrical applicances before leaving the room. Third, never throw rubbish here and there. Fourth, save water.
It's time that we should do something to protect our environment. Only by taking good care of our earth today will it be more beautiful tomorrow.
Thank you!
The students’ Union
【解析】根据文章提示和要求写一篇倡议书，学生应该感到有话可说，很易上手。学生须注意句子与句子，段落与段落之间的自然衔接，也应鼓励学生多种表达方式。如下：
一句多译：1.The earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it, not only for ourselves but also for our future generations.
改译：In terms of ourselves and our future generation, it is our duty to take good care of the earth, because it is our home after all.2. Many effective meaures have been taken to deal with it by the governm ent.
改译： The goverment has taken some active measures to deal with it.3.I think we should follow the following advice.
改译：In my opinion, the following suggestions should be followed.4.Only by taking good care of our earth t oday will it be more beautiful tomorrow.
改译：Only if we take good care of our earth today, will it be more beautiful tomorrow.