Question

【题目】假设你是李华, 某国际交流中心将在你市组织一个欧洲中学生夏令营活动,并在网上征集可提供住宿的中国家庭。你的家庭符合要求, 请你给活动负责人写一封申请信。

对提供住宿家庭的要求:

1. 有一间独立卧室; 2. 家庭成员具备良好的素质; 3. 能够用英语交流.

注意：1. 文章开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；

2. 词数：120左右；

3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir/ Madam,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I have learnt from the Internet that you will organize a summer camp for European students in my city and you need some host families. I’d like to apply for it. Please allow me to introduce something about my family.

My name is Li Hua, a Senior 3 student and I have been learning English for nearly 10 years. So I have no difficulty in communicating with foreign guests in English. Both my parents are good at spoken English and listening. They are well-educated and warm-hearted people. Besides, my parents do well in cooking, not only traditional Chinese dishes but also Western food. So my foreign guests can have delicious food in my home. What’s more, our house is big and we have a separate bedroom for foreign guests.

I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。首先审题，假设你是李华, 某国际交流中心将在你市组织一个欧洲中学生夏令营活动,并在网上征集可提供住宿的中国家庭。你的家庭符合要求, 请你给活动负责人写一封申请信。对提供住宿家庭的要求: 1. 有一间独立卧室; 2. 家庭成员具备良好的素质; 3. 能够用英语交流.其次要确定时态，用一般现在时。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。例如I have learnt from the Internet that you will organize a summer camp for European students in my city and you need some host families.这里含有一个宾语从句。这篇短文使用了一些高级短语，为文章增色不少。例如have no difficulty in在……方面没有困难。Not only…but also意思是不仅……而且。