Question

【题目】随着科技的发展，iPad已经成为中学生的新宠。假如你是高中生李华，请用英语给某报社写一封信，谈谈中学生使用iPad的情况。信的内容必须包括以下几点：1.使用iPad对学习的好处（至少两点）；
2.可能产生的负面影响（至少两点）；
3.提出自己的使用建议。
主意：1、词数120左右，开头已经为你写好（不计入总词数）；
2、可适当增加细节。
Dear Editor,
I'm a senior high school student named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and think it's a fashion to use them. ......

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,
I'm a senior high school student named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and think it's a fashion to use them. U sing an iPad, we can listen to music, download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen. Apparently, it's helpful to our study, especially to our English listening.
Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music without earphones, which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed. Some of them even waste precious time in class playing video games.
In my opinion, as students, we should make good use of iPads to help achieve academic success.The classroom is a place for students to study, and therefore concentration is awfully needed for us to learn our lessons. Furthermore, the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPads in a proper way.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】本文是一篇书信类的作文题目，主要讲述了李华关于现在中学生对于ipad的使用情况的一份讲述信。写作文前首先要抓住作文的大意，如本篇作文的中心就是针对中学生对于ipad的使用情况进行论述；其次就是根据题目中给出的要点，建立自己文章的大纲，如本篇文章主要分成以下几个部分：第一部分简单的介绍自己以及讲述了ipad的好处，第二部分讲述了某些同学不一样的看法，第三部分讲述了自己的观点，最后一部分就是自己提出的一些建议。文章的脉络清晰，并且按照题目所给的要求已经进行分点阐述，用词简单新颖，句型结构完整，值得学生加以借鉴。