Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你从美国朋友Tom处借的一本书不慎遗失，请你给他写封电子邮件，内容要点如下：

1.表示歉意；2.解释原因；3.提出赔偿办法。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I’m sorry to tell you that I’ve lost your book that I borrowed from you. Now I’m expressing my deepest apology for my carelessness.

Actually, I put the book in my schoolbag after we met at school yesterday. But to my sorrow, it was stolen on my way home. I tried to get it back but failed. How angry and guilty I felt!

This morning, I went to buy the same book in some bookstores but it was very expensive. However, I promise that I’ll tighten my belt these days to get you a completely new one by the end of this month. Please forgive me again and accept my sincere apology.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇邮件应用文，内容提示较简洁，只是框架，但学生容易把握写作和写作目的。考生在写作之前必须认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，用一般现在时和将来时。人称用第一和第二人称。根据写作要求文章分三段来写。第一段首先对不能及时回复邮件表示歉意并表明原因，之后提出自己的打算。第二段重点描述自己的具体计划和想法。第三段总结全文。再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。

【亮点说明】

文章要点齐全，表达思路明确，知识点运用恰当到位，文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少。I’m sorry to tell you that I’ve lost your book that I borrowed from you.并语从句和定语从句完美结合；I put the book in my schoolbag after we met at school yesterday.after引导时间状语从句；How angry and guilty I felt!感叹句使用巧妙；I promise that I’ll tighten my belt these days to get you a completely new one by the end of this month.that引导宾语从句，并且动词不定式做目的状语；另外，Actually, But to my sorrow, However,等的运用为文章增色添彩。