Question

13．同龄压力（peer pressure）是青少年成长过程中经常遇到的问题．假如你是李华，你的朋友Jack发来电子邮件求助如何应这个问题．请你给他回一封电子邮件，帮助他认识到同龄压力是不可避免的，以及缓解压力的办法．
注意：
1．词数不少于120个；
2．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称．
Dear Jack，
In your last e-mail，you asked about how to deal with peer pressure．
                                                                        
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
We often find someone who is superior to us．
高分句型二：
Thirdly，we can learn from those who have real talents．
句型一 who is superior to us 该句是一个由who引导的定语从句，who在从句中作主语，替代前面的先行词someone
句型二 those who have real talents．该句是一个由who引导的定语从句，who在从句中作主语，替代前面的先行词those
此外，该文章中还有以下重要短语和词汇：
deal with 处理   share with 与某人分享   compare with  与某人进行比较  spare no effort to do sth 努力做某事
重要句型和重点短语的结合使用，使得文章表达更有层次，表达更为准确

解答 Dear Jack，
    In your last e-mail，you asked about how to deal with peer pressure． I'm very glad to share my views with you．（写信目的）
    Peer pressure is a common problem for us young students．We often find someone who is superior to us．（高分句型一）For example，they come from a better family，or they have more talents．Firstly，I think we must face it and be aware that peer pressure is unavoidable．Secondly，we must know that every one of us is unique and has our own advantages．We needn't compare ourselves with others and feel discouraged and depressed．Thirdly，we can learn from those who have real talents．（高分句型二）It's useless just to envy them．（问题分析）By learning from their advantages，we can improve ourselves quickly．Finally，we should take a careful look at our present level and set a practical goal，and then spare no effort to achieve our goals．（缓解方式）Because of our focus on our own goals，we have no time and energy to think about peer pressure．
    I hope my advice can be of help to you．
                                                                                                                                      Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

点评 这是一篇开放式作文，写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．