Question

【题目】假定你是美国留学生李华，最近在当地报纸上看到一则游泳培训班的广告，称其有资历丰富的教练，一周包会。你会一点游泳，想在暑假参加训练提升技巧。请你写信了解相关情况，要点如下：

1.训练的具体时间和地点；

2.条件和费用；

3.其他特别注意事项。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I have read your advertisement in the newspaper, which is really appealing to me.

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I have read your advertisement in the newspaper, which is really appealing to me. With fully qualified instructors, you ensure that learners will be able to swim well after a week’s training.

I can swim a little yet I am interested in attending the training course to enhance my skills. Therefore I am writing to inquire when and where the training course will be given and how long the training course will last each day. Besides, I was wondering if you could tell me how much you will charge me. Last but not least, would you be so kind as to tell me if there is anything special that should be prepared?

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文属于应用文中的书信，要求以李华的身份向游泳培训班写信咨询暑期游泳训练课程的具体信息。

写作要点有：1．训练的具体时间和地点。2．条件和费用。3．其他特别注意的事项。已经在题干中罗列清晰，只需要详述要点，并适当发挥即可。本文用第一人称，一般现在时和一般将来时来写。写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型，注意行文的连贯和逻辑性，还要注意使用多样化的句式和高级句式，使文章富有变化，提高文章档次。