Question

【题目】假设你是李华，最近你获悉:为了让世界更好地了解中国，你市将举行”中国好故事--我眼中的中国”演讲比赛。请根据以下要点提示，给你的留学生好朋友John写一封邮件，鼓励他参加。内容包括:

1.活动宗旨；

2.比赛时间、报名方式；

3.适当建议。

注意:

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:中国好故事--我眼中的中国:Chinese Story--China in my eye

Dear John,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

In order to get China deeply unknown to the whole world and showcase China’s remarkable progress in recent decades to the world, our city is to launch a speech competition called Chinese Story---China in my eyes. Knowing that you have been studying in China for several years and are extremely familiar with the development of China, I’m writing to encourage you to participate in it.

The competition will be held on the 28th next month, which will ensure you enough time to make preparations for it. But you are supposed to sign up on the Internet before the end of this month. Whoever is interested in it is welcome to join. As a foreign student, you have witnessed the great improvement of Chinese people’s life and the rapid development of the society. Therefore, I’m convinced that it’s you that must be the very person to win the game. Of course, it’s suggested that you focus your topic more on Chin’s new “four great inventions”--------high speed rail, shared bike, online shopping or Alipay.

Looking forward to your participation and good performance.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，邀请你的留学生朋友参加演讲比赛。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

写作内容：1.活动宗旨；

2.比赛时间、报名方式；

3.适当建议。

第二步:列提纲（重点词组）

Launch a speech；be familiar with；participate in；make preparations for；be supposed to；

sign up；be interested in；focus on；look forward to

第三步：连词成句

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改