Question

广州某电视台打算开办一个面向中学生观众的英语节目，新聘任了来自英国的John作为节目编辑助理。现在，John就节目内容向广大中学生征求意见。
写作内容:
假如你是学生李华，建议开办“广州全接触”（All-round Guangzhou）节目。请根据以下节目设想给John写信：

节目内容	介绍广州的历史、教育、著名景点、饮食、名人
播出时间	每周六、日，方便学生周末观看
其他设想	邀请中学生参加节目，提高学生的收看兴趣
开办理由	1．中学生可以更多地了解广州文化，在亚运会期间向外国游客介绍广州 有助于提高中学生的英语水平
预期效果	将会受到中学生的欢迎

 
【写作内容】
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。
2．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总句数。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
Dear John,
I know you’re going to set up an English program for middle school students．So I’m writing to suggest a program---“All-round Guangzhou”．
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I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration．
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

A sample version:
Dear John,
I know you’re going to set up an English program for middle school students．So I’m writing to suggest a program--- “ All-round Guangzhou”．This program will cover topics like the history, education, famous scenic spots, food and famous people of Guangzhou．It would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it．Besides, you can also invite some middle school students to get involved in the program, which will surely arouse other students’ interest in it．Not only will this program help students improve their English, but also get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors during the 2010 Asian Games．I am sure it will be well-received by the middle school students．
I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration．
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua

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