Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Mr. Johnson lived in the woods with his wife and children. He owned a farm, that looked almost abandoned. Luckily, he also had a cow which produced milk every day. He exchanged the milk with other food. The cow was their only means of support. One day, the cow was eating grass while it began to rain heavily. While making efforts to run away, she falls over the hill and died. Then the Johnsons had to make the living without the cow. In order to support his family, Mr. Johnson began to plant vegetable. Since the plants took a while to grow it, he started cutting down trees to sell them. Thought about his children’s clothes, he started growing cotton too. When harvest came, he was already selling vegetables and cotton m the market where people met regular. Now it occurred him that his farm had much potential and that the death of the cow was a bit of luck.

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】1.that改为which考查定语从句，非限制性定语从句用which引导不用that，故将that改为which。

2.with改为for考查介词，短语exchange … for …交换，兑换。故将with改为for。

3.while改为when 考查连词，只能和延续性动词连用，when可以和延续性动词连用，也可以和短暂性动词连用。Began是短暂性动词，故将while改为when。

4.falls改为fell考查时态，整篇文章都是在讲述过去的情况，用过去时态，故将falls改为fell。

5.the改为a考查冠词，短语make a living谋生。故将the改为a.

6.vegetable改为vegetables考查名词单数，句意：为了养活家人，Johnson先生开始种植蔬菜。蔬菜是可数名词用复数形式，故将vegetable改为vegetables。

7.去掉it考查代词，句意：自从植物生长。Grow生长，用作不及物动词，故将it去掉。

8.thought改为thinking考查非谓语动词，句意：考虑到孩子的衣服，他又开始种植棉花。考虑和he之间是主动关系，故将thought改为thinking。

9.regular改为regularly考查副词，句意：他在人们经常聚会的地方卖蔬菜和棉花。用副词修饰动词，故将regular改为regularly。

10.occurred后加to考查动词不定式，固定短语occur to somebody something某事发生在某人身上，故将occurred后加to。