Question

【题目】假如你是李华，现任你们学校的学生会主席。你将代表学生会起草一份倡议书，号召全校同学行动起来，为环保运动做出自己的努力。同时下周六学校将组织同学在全市进行环保宣传活动，征召志愿者到校学生会报名。

注意：(1)短文应该包括以上所提供的主要信息，可适当发挥;(2)词数：120左右;(3)倡议书格式以提供，不计入总词数;(4)参考词汇：征召(新人) recruit。

25 October, 2016

Dear brothers and sisters,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Students' Union

Answer 1

【答案】

25 October, 2016

Dear brothers and sisters,

On behalf of the University Students' Union, I, the Chairman of the Union , am earnestly calling for your active participation in our environmental protection campaign. It is the duty of every global villager; man just can not sustain his glorious civilization without a rewarding environment, which will be possible only if man makes considerable efforts to protect the environment.

Do you cherish precious opportunities to volunteer in our joint efforts in environmental protection? Here is a great one not to be missed by any enthusiastic youth; Right next Saturday, our university is to run a publicity campaign to advocate environmental protection across the city. The University Students' Union will be in charge of recruitment of volunteers. Let's join our hands and take action immediately.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Students' Union

【解析】

试题分析：

本文要求代表学生会起草一份倡议书，号召全校同学，为环保运动行动起来。同时下周六学校将组织同学在全市进行环保宣传活动，征召志愿者到校学生会报名。文章给出了汉语提示。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时和一般将来时为主。(4)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：非限制性定语从句…which will be possible only if man makes considerable efforts to protect the environment.；祈使句 Let's join our hands and take action immediately.3.使用了重要短语：On behalf of代表；call for号召；makes efforts努力；in charge of 管理；take action 采取行动。